Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Re-do Pros and Cons article

link: http://uspolitics.about.com/od/gaymarriage/a/status_N04.htm

Proposition: Allowing Gay marriage in America. I believe that gay marriage should be allowed because everyone should have the chance of equal rights no matter what sex they are attracted too.
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  1. lsueokaSeptember 11, 2010 at 5:21 PM

    Hi Darian,
    Good revision. I would make the statement even shorter by taking out the "I believe" and just starting with the statement, "Gay marriage should...."
    mrs s
    revision score: 4

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