I believe in the "Law of Attraction." Law of Attraction is basically thinking of things, and those thoughts, becomeing reality. It is also about attracting positive and negative things to you. If I have negative thoughts, negative things are more likely to happen. But if I have positive thinking in my daily life, more positive things are more likely to happen to me.
For me in my daily life, I like to think positive about other too, because if I think negative about that person, I believe that negative things will attract towards me to. Some people would call that karma, but to me, I look at it as the "Law of Attraction." For instance, in my personal experiences, I see a girl that is not my type, I do not call her a mean name, I say "Shes beautiful, but not my type." Another example would be if and when I am sick. If I am sick, I think of feeling good again so that thought may become true.
So in my daily life, I like to think positive and flush out all negative thoughts so that I can live a positive life. I noticed that whenever I have negative thoughts in general, I do not feel as good as when I think of positive thoughts. In my preference, I feel that negative thoughts create, attract negative energy towards myself.
This belief I have does not only apply to my daily life, but also others. For example, if I were to yell at someone for doing something wrong and be negative towards that person, I would be sending negative energy towards him or her. The most common thing a person would do would be that the person I was yelling at will receive the negative energy that I created, making that person negative also.
On the other hand, If I were to be positive towards someone, giving praise and gratitude for something,I would most likely see a lot of more good work from that person, only because you were positive, giving him or her positive energy. I also believe that with this belief I have, I am able to make people's days a whole lot better, and help others to live a happy life, everyday, every year, forever.
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Hi Darian (:
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your essay! It's length is just perfect! Not too long, and not too short. You stated situations that pertain to your belief and those situations helped to bloom your essay. After reading your essay, I, too, believe in the "Law of Attraction" and I'm pretty sure that other people will believe it too since your essay is so convincing. Your "voice" really shows through your essay and your use of sentence fluency is present. Some revisions that I could recommend for you is to proofread your essay about 3-4 times. There are some places in which you should place commas between sentences. You seem to say, “This belief I have” a lot. It woud be much better if you change some of those to “This belief”. The “I have” is sort of unnecessary. Also, you essay could be a bit stronger if you were to elaborate and talk more about your real life-experiences. Maybe just a couple of sentences would be good to go. Overall, nice job! (:
-Czarina
Hello Darian,
ReplyDeleteYour essay was pretty good, but i feel like the first paragraph could of had more work be done to it. The first paragraph is usually the paragraph that gets the readers attention, and i wasn't as attentive for the first para graph because you just went straight into what "Law of Attraction" is. But besides that everything is fine, and i like how you have examples, and how you would do things in your perspective. Good job :)